Lemme just say how much I LOVEEEEE my CPâ€™s. Dream doesnâ€™t have a blog so I canâ€™t like post a link or anything but she totally rocks.
But anyway I have this WIP (FU < --not cussing those are WIP initials LOL)....it's been in idle on page 89. I didn't want to write anymore on it because, well I didn't want to hit page 300 or worse, the end and go OMFG THAT'S WHAT'S WRONG WITH THIS STORY. See, cussing is good for writing too 😆 But I asked her (and Sasha) to take a look becauseeeee I wanted to try and contest with it but I also knew there was something wrong. I've plotted this damn thing twice already, and written the beginning twice, revised once...so I sent my tweaking ideas for round three kazillion to the both of them with the first 30 pages. And Dream comes back with, I think people who are passionate about sex are passionate about everything, sometimes even arguing.
I think the lightbulb over my head just exploded 🙄
UPDATE: Thereâ€™s this really cute guy outside with a shaved head and a goatee and niceâ€¦.thighs. Donâ€™t ask. 🙄
UPDATE 2: Really Cute Guy is gone and CP #2 has checked in. *waves to Sasha* â€¦with completely different feedback. Well, not really completely but differentâ€¦but the same. Have I confused you yet?
I think the combined feedback of Dreamâ€™s comments above and Sashaâ€™s *ahem* are sadly spot-on:` these pages make it seem like YOU arenâ€™t sure where this story is going. They feel â€œramblingâ€ and at page 30 I, as a reader, still dont; know what the story is about.
OOPS! 😕 Back to workâ€¦..